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Made this a couple days ago, but didn't have internet. Remembered it again today, so here we go. The teeth are currently made of boxes, but if it is deemed necessary I will make them into planes. I am pretty happy with the shape of the body of well, but of course I am always open to critique and suggestions.





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I like the general scale of it.  Body and tail seem to be a  good length.  Head box is overly tall, and the 2-piece jaws feel a bit chunky.  I think it'd be better off with one piece jaws and a shorter head box, or, perhaps even rather than a head box, it just has two 2-piece jaws that hinge at the back.  That's basically how they look irl - two giant jaws with eyes on top.  The teeth will probably  be better off as individual fractional size boxes, in order to make them thinner.    I think it's justified, to give that extra threat-level appearance.  Right now the two downward front teeth, especially, are giving him a buck-tooth vibe. 

Wish the eyes could be on top.  My quick experiments didn't really yield anything great for that, but I think it could be done, especially in combination with two 2-piece jaws.

The lower leg boxes, the way they're structured to me makes them seem like feet, and then they look awkward with the paper-flat claws.  I'd suggest ditch the flat toes, make the lower leg box look more like a lower leg, and just put a couple pixels there for claws.    Crocodiles attack with their jaws so I'd saw emphasize the jaws and reduce the legs to just mainly be legs.



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